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Anonymous Coward · 1mo

You're rewriting Erosion? Not remastering it?

Yeah. Looking back, Erosion just... had a lot of issues. From just not great grammar since it was my first Korps story and it was before I started having people check my stuff, but also in terms of writing it just felt so... basic. Erosion was in such a rush to get to Jonie meeting the Korps that it didn't get much of a chance of digging into Jonie, or even having anything that kept interest flowing. Simply put, it was far too generic and shows a lot of signs of my anxiety of not getting noticed. So... I'm rewriting it, aspects of it from the original will be kept so it doesn't interfere with events from my more recent work, but overall, rewriting a good portion of it over from scratch.

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